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Мое творчество

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Morning

Usual underground station in Moscow. A lot of people, who want to come at their work places, and some people who working in the underground.
Three young boys wait the train. They are definitely students. They have 4 lectures today, but they decided that they will not come at the last lecture. They will go to the cinema, because today the first day to see the new film from famous American Hollywood.
This is the old woman; she works as the charwoman in theatre. She likes her work because in this theatre many good people and they have good relations. Now she think about her grandson 19 years old, who coming to her every week to see how she lives, and maybe she needs his help. He is very careful and this old woman loves him very much.
Let’s see on this man about 30 years old. He is in a blue funk now because he almost kisses the hares foot and his boss don’t like it. This man will has some problems today, like yesterday and the day before yesterday. Young man who stays near him looks better.
This man is young economist and wants to be a success. He has everything for it: he is easy on the eyes, clever, creative and so on. He never missed the boll and even now he talking with somebody by mobile phone, he always keeps in touch, but maybe this is his wife.
Another person is very beautiful woman; she is luxury, foxy, for rich people only. She never misses the boat to be in the public eye. She likes tennis and she is very good sportsman, best in Moscow (maybe because all Russian tennis stars live in USA). She is a good player, but for some men she easy touch, because she knows how to get anything she wants. But nobody knows why she is in underground now.
And there are a lot of any kinds of people, they are all personalities, they are all having friends, relatives, thoughts and needs. They are all having what to do, but in 3 seconds terrorist’s bomb will explode.

by Steffler
11 April 2006

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а почему про Москву и метро?) раз на англ надо было про башенки  близняшенки, весь мир смотрел затаив дыхание)

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У нас в метро как будто небыло ничего...

У меня еще есть. Выкладывать?

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может я чего не понимаю, но имхо англичане (американцы) так не говорят, плюс ошибок куча..

Отредактировано yavlok (2008-10-06 13:10:00)

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вай, дорогой, там пара ошибок. Не больше... я счас если поднапрягусь, то даже вспомню где.
А то, что не говорят... Открой какую-нибудь нашу книжку и грянь... так как там автор пишет, тоже ничто не говорит.
Этот рассказ у меня оценивал мой преподаватель, гражданин Англии, между прочим.
=)

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хорошо, если так.. а то вот на курсах английского нас от подобного отучивают)

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ну хз-хз...
всегда была литературная речь и разговорная...
я очень неплохо знаю английский жаргон... но писать надо литературным языком)

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американцы именно так и говорят, и после школы ,курсов и тд, понять  о чём речь бывает оч. сложно)
тут ещё нормальный вариант, а вот в чате общаться с ними вобще беда)

Отредактировано Vagabond (2008-10-07 11:47:13)

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